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`Why Tight Shorts are Important` – by Jan Ruth – FREE download: 26/27 June

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When someone says `shorts` – what does it mean to you? I always used to prefer those continental jobs the tennis players favour. But are they short trousers, or long shorts? These days, now that I am back to writing, ‘shorts’ mean something totally different.

 

I’ve always written novel length stories, and I’m thinking now that my penchant for long trousers may have a subjective effect on all of this. I hate my legs in shorts! Does it explain why I find writing short stories so difficult? They are time capsules, brief but intense insights into someone’s world. They still have to carry all the same criteria as a novel, but all the principles have to be honed to within an inch of their lives, or hems, if you want to stay with the theme. The length can vary from ankle-grazing continental style (almost a novella, but not quite?) to old-fashioned budgie smugglers (flash fiction!)

 

I think mine are the discreet kind, just on the knee or maybe slightly above.

 

Is all this the first signs of madness? Oh, very probably, and yet I found someone from the same sewing box. John Hudspith is a man with pins in his mouth and a pair of pinking shears in his hand. I send the big roll of material to him and it comes back all cut out into smaller, more pleasing shapes. He can turn any billowing sheet of raw silk into a good-looking pair of shorts. A silk purse from a pig’s ear. This is my editor’s comfort zone without a doubt, he devours the over-worded paragraph with the tenacity of a royal dressmaker. When I’m writing I see him in my mind’s eye with a machete, bearing down on the over-grown narrative until I give in and hit delete.

 

Let’s be serious for a moment now. I have a small but tortured history of working with editors, agents and publishers and one develops a ‘nose’ for the real thing, like the fragrance of fresh-washed cotton… Oops sorry about that, lapsed into analogy again. When I was introduced to John I don’t mind admitting I was on the verge of despair. I’d had dealings with a big editorial company from London some thirty years ago, so I know how editing and proofreading should work but of course with self-publishing we don’t have the cash advances and the backing, and we have to make all of these decisions for ourselves. I wanted to find someone with those same skills who didn’t charge the London prices. The internet is a very messy sewing box and not everyone puts the needles and pins in a safe place.  I struggled. I was let down, and disappointed.tight1

Until I found the excellent John Hudspith.

I want to see his shorts. I’m betting they are very, very small.

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Thank you, Jan.

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A Testimonial…

“I wrote a book. Many of my friends and members of my family had read it and some had offered constructive advice. I uploaded it to peer review websites and gained more from the thoughts of other writers. I edited and re-edited, then wrote a little more. I was too close to my words however, and knew I needed a ruthless and commercial eye to turn my work into the best book it could be.

I approached Johnny in some trepidation, knowing the respect in which my peers hold him as an editor of fiction, and aware he did not pull his punches. With my anxiety, I handed him a dilemma, because I was seeking his help not with a work of fiction, but a memoir. I complicated this further by making the subject of the book, my daughter, who died nearly eleven years ago at the age of five.

Johnny was frank in his misgivings about working with me. Considering the subject matter, he wondered aloud whether I was robust enough to bear tough editing should the manuscript need it. He gently pointed out that if a criticism upset me he would be mortified, but that his critical eye would be assessing the pull of my story like any other on which he worked. Was I happy to proceed on this basis? I gulped, and agreed.

With provisos and caveats in place, Johnny began by explaining how he worked. I recommend that all writers in whatever stage of editing read his insightful (and funny) thoughts about the various reader irritations (distorters) that an edit should pick up. Holding files? I’d never heard of them, but when Johnny explained their existence, it changed the way I perceived my writing. I sent him the first three chapters of my memoir. He preceded his comments with his thoughts about the editing role, and I could not put these into better words than Johnny’s own.

I see your work as one would view any art form; be that a painting, sculpture, play or film, and as your editor I am here to help refine that form and make it the best that it can be. With the finest chisel we will nick away the bumps and jars, with a deft brush we will smoothen the flow, with a director’s hat we will arrange the production to maximise impact and effect, and so the finished product will entrance those that open the pages to read’.

Johnny said he needed me to agree with at least most of the changes he suggested if we were to work together successfully on the rest of the book. I agreed with them all. He was honest, saying my opening chapter was ‘bland and boring’, but he explained why. He was right, and I saw what I needed to do.

Over the next few months, he edited three chapter sections at a time. I had the most work to do with the earlier parts but after a while, I understood more of his vision and I edited ahead, anticipating his comments. He wrote about what worked well, which boosted my confidence and helped me to trust him when he showed me where the writing was weaker. I am now as convinced as modesty allows that my writing is better at the end of the editing process, and that this is entirely due to Johnny’s deft tutelage and patience.

Before we began, Johnny painted himself as a tough and primarily commercial being. Perhaps I’m ruining his image even to hint that our work together proved that while never losing sight of what makes a reader keep reading, he is far from lacking in emotion. Thank you, Johnny, it’s been a privilege. I’m looking forward to the next book.”

 

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